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  • Blog: Saturday, Nov 24

    Sunday, Nov 25, 2007 3:25PM / Standard Entry / Members only
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    ...
    Every minute passed
    Has seeped through a cloth
    That was meant to be a sheet of steel.

    I poured my heart into a disguise.

    And there you stood -
    Hunching, feeling no shame...
    Watching as my sweat and tears
    Came rushing down...
    Down the waterfall containing
    All the heart in which I poured.

    My body felt nothing,
    But my mind fooled me
    Into believing that my back and my limbs,
    And mostly my heart and soul
    Ached with throbbing, burning pain.

    And there you stood -
    Hunching over, and feeling no shame.

     

     

     

    ©2007 Olivia Thai

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  • sbkidde
    posted on Friday, May 16, 2008 3:05AM [Report]
    Beautiful juxtaposition of hard and  soft. It's like a building is usually hard enough to withstand the rain, until the rain comes with typhoon force winds. Then the building breaks down to reveal, the soft human content. Have mercy.

    Great range and quality to your singing voice also, BTW. Thanks for sharing.

    Steve
  • anrizzy
    posted on Friday, Mar 21, 2008 8:50AM [Report]
    haha ur here too?! pretty cool, check out my blog please =D it's anrong.three-half.com

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