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  • Pseudo lab 1 - research on steam of consciousness writing versus elderly dyslexia

    Tuesday, Mar 3, 2009 8:42AM / Standard Entry / Members only
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    I always shame to speak/write/think in English, even though I spent decades to learn it. Simply just not work.

    This lab is testing my intuitive in this language, which I write what I think/react/inspired by the sound/voice/chat with people and surrounding within the project period, by employed sort of ’steam of consciousness’ writing, to express my thinking/feeling without concern on grammar and vocabulary.

    I’ve started with only one short writing There is a line, before the project day.


    ——————————————————————-
    ⎢There is a line
    ⎢can never cross

    ⎢You

    ⎢Me

    ⎢Mine

    ⎢Yours

    ⎢But that’s nothing wrong

    Would you ⎢
    name the line ⎢
    read me the line ⎢

    cross the line ⎢

    ——————————————————————-

    Would you mind to give me a hand?

    Then I’ll hold it
    and tag along with you
    until you hate me


    Would you mind to give me a hand?

    ——————————————————————-

    There is a word I can’t spell
    Which spread out across the Universe

    You know what
    I know nothing about it, in real
    Even I always say


    Oh my G..

    ——————————————————————-

    My blood is brownish red

    Coffee wash my vein
    Caffeine live and breathe
    The grinder activates my heart

    Coffee colors brown
    Caffeine colors red

    But I can’t sure the color of my heart

    ——————————————————————-

    The room full of the smell of sunshine
    brightening up the corner

    The corner brighten for an hour
    still white on grey, doesn’t wash out

    I am watching the corner for an hour
    then I lose the room
    from front to rear, top to bottom


    I lose the room
    but smell

    ——————————————————————-

    Perhaps you are a good listener
    please give me 3 minutes

    count from now
    go out to the corridor
    and listen


    I tried, before you came
    then I heard your footsteps

    3 minutes after

    ——————————————————————-

    You may know nothing about me
    But you can know me
    privately

    Just come to my private view

    It will be privately, for public
    as you know, publicly
    not about private

    ——————————————————————-

    Know Zen, heard about it
    at least, you say

    Who care?
    Especially youth, you say

    Zen is
    for whom care
    not about age

    ——————————————————————-

    Am I too complicated?

    I am so stupid, to keep it simple
    Spending whole life to pretend
    an intelligent
    No time to learn how to keep it simple

    Does Intelligent’s life simple?

    ——————————————————————-

    You come to me, ask why
    for a question I don’t understand

    Why I don’t understand your question? You ask
    for a question I don’t understand


    Is that my question?

    ——————————————————————-

    Can you see the gap?
    When I saw it, first time
    I thought about it, all night long

    A man pass the gap from right, a woman from left
    they both disappear in seconds

    I’m sure you can find the gap here
    somewhere in/out the room


    I found it in/out my mind

    ——————————————————————-

    Several bags of coffee beans
    wait to be ground

    They’re all labeled, differently
    and you read them, one by one

    The label


    When you finish a cup
    What do you think remains in your mouth
    Over the tongue

    Coffee
    or label with Star?

    ——————————————————————-

    The Art of Loving
    I read, or say, never read
    because I didn’t read till end

    You think about Love
    or Loving? I doubt it

    Any different? You tell me


    No! I get it
    It’s Lov-ing! If you know the different
    it’s Love

    Don’t tell me the end
    and hope you never know

    ——————————————————————-

    You said my words are better than my works
    I smiled

    You said my works are better than me
    I laughed

    What can I say?
    They’re mine


    Unfortunately, that’s me

    ——————————————————————-

    I set up a lab, with aim
    which everyone will ask me

    I set up a lab, with aim
    an aim to find an aim

    No need to aim high

    ——————————————————————-

    I spend 50% time to think, think about you
    you feel nothing about me

    I spend 50% time to drink, drink with you
    you say you know me in depth

    Why I think so hard, drink so little

    ——————————————————————-

    You’re filming me
    when I’m recording you

    You hate your voice
    I hate my face

    Sadly, we can’t swap
    although I like your voice
    Off the record

    ——————————————————————-

    You can’t remember my name
    Hard to spell, difficult to pronounce
    horrible in shape

    The reason why people always
    be ignored, you think
    No matter how hard they tried, how great in work
    No one can be memorized, in this place


    It’s name, given by family
    please accept my apology
    plus a piece of

    memory stick

    ——————————————————————-

    My writing doesn’t make sense
    when you read it, you complained

    Its hurt
    The writing you read is the best of mine, I believe

    Perhaps I should reinforce my sense, except the primary five


    The sense of humor

    ——————————————————————-

    I had three dreams, before I grow up
    A lyrics writer
    A novelist
    An artist

    I gave up to write, in my mother language
    I decided to make, gave up my mother language

    Did you feel I betrayed you?
    My dear mother

Entry comments (3)

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  • pammyng
    posted on Tuesday, Mar 3, 2009 5:05PM [Report]
    hey, that's very interesting...wow, that's a long writing...perhaps, u would like to write more...practise makes perfect...so kind of Allyson (enigma306) to offer her help...
  • enigma306
    posted on Tuesday, Mar 3, 2009 11:55AM [Report]
    What an odd little experiment.  It seems to be work for you.  What you've written is interesting.  Were you free associating words?  It's very interesting.  You know if you ever need some help, I will help you.
  • Jaine
    posted on Tuesday, Mar 3, 2009 9:27AM [Report]
    wow
    very poignant writing

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