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  • Love story

    Wednesday, Sep 19, 2007 6:57AM / Standard Entry / Members only
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    This is not a poem, I didnt even think or edit, it's just pure feelings, no thoughts, no writing skills.



     Love story

    I will only drink all the kisses

    I will never give you.

    Whenever I am cold,

    the arms that will never surround me

    will soften my dreams

    In your eyes I will see stars long time forgotten,

    but I will never be able to get lost in them.

    The night will be darker,

    when I can only look at you from afar.

     

    They say a dream only dies

    when it does come true.

    then what will happen with this one?

    It will be buried inside me, alive.

    A dream without wings to fly,

    a dream torturing my very soul from inside

    with the sweetness of your smile.

     

    I will drink all the kisses

    I will never give you.

    Whenever I feel alone,

    I will whisper to myself:

    nothing can harm me,

    thus my heart sleeps by your side,

    invisible to your love.

     

    I will sing to the starless night,

    to take my soul by your side,

    to protect you from harm from afar.

     

    I will sing the greatest love story

    of all times, which will never come true.

    Shakespeare would kill to write us,

    the moon would fall to see it come true

    the Gods themselves would cry

    pure sadness would vanish from this world,

    If only…

    If only…

    If only…





Entry comments (17)

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  • chen
     
    posted on Saturday, Oct 27, 2007 9:12PM [Report]
    aww..you're emotional when writing this one.. hehe..=) nice one though... i like this one "They say a dream only dies when it does come true.". and it reminded me of the movie IF ONLY...=)
  • Seraphina
     
    posted on Monday, Oct 15, 2007 3:20PM [Report]
    beautiful , I love it
  • Timoky
     
    posted on Sunday, Sep 23, 2007 11:09AM [Report]
    "It will be buried inside me, alive."
    i love this one
    thanks for visiting ,even though no leaving a message . haha  . reading ur words , thinking if u are beside me i wish i can give u a hug .
  • kutabarety
     
    posted on Saturday, Sep 22, 2007 10:21AM [Report]
    Wow that's deep man but awesome!!!! It's a good poem I like the meaning behind it.
  • sandylovesjetli
     
    posted on Saturday, Sep 22, 2007 10:03AM [Report]
    simply beautiful, you are a sensitive man!! nice to meet you!
  • MR.LONELY
     
    posted on Friday, Sep 21, 2007 6:18PM [Report]
    I supposed that was lyrics at first..
    it's beautiful~
  • carmellarose
     
    posted on Friday, Sep 21, 2007 1:18PM [Report]
    My emotional reaction to this...I can't describe..

    Sorry for jetting off like that on you!!! People can be very demanding when they've arrived home to a locked door with arms full of stuff!! ; ) *huuuuugs* :)
  • silky
     
    posted on Friday, Sep 21, 2007 2:16AM [Report]
    *sniff* too close to the feelings I have to deal with *sniff*
  • koojincage
     
    posted on Thursday, Sep 20, 2007 10:59PM [Report]
    Great!!!
  • Janina
     
    posted on Thursday, Sep 20, 2007 9:46PM [Report]
    poema hermoso.. (^_^)
    awww... didn't know Raul has a softer & poetic side.
  • paradox_din
    Official artist
    posted on Thursday, Sep 20, 2007 4:59AM [Report]
    Sad... Happy Raul goin emotional..
  • Dreamy
     
    posted on Thursday, Sep 20, 2007 2:54AM [Report]
    very nice..
  • Shirley_aya
     
    posted on Wednesday, Sep 19, 2007 10:11PM [Report]
    daintily~
  • dragontattoo
     
    posted on Wednesday, Sep 19, 2007 8:34PM [Report]
    If you don't class it as poetry,  then it's beautiful pire feelings. Pitures go well with it too.
  • marryl
     
    posted on Wednesday, Sep 19, 2007 4:03PM [Report]
    sooo beautiful = )
  • celineblog
     
    posted on Wednesday, Sep 19, 2007 1:26PM [Report]
    It's beautiful.
  • peachey
     
    posted on Wednesday, Sep 19, 2007 10:53AM [Report]
    That's very lovely Raul. Pat yourself on the back...

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